tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9078795.post3165919283939561083..comments2023-10-26T17:35:21.681+03:00Comments on Pardon my French: Sleepless in Kuwait - A Storyillusionhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10442583862568981918noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9078795.post-67794678340574486732009-01-16T22:00:00.000+03:002009-01-16T22:00:00.000+03:00Thanks Anonymous for the feedbackThanks Anonymous for the feedbackillusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10442583862568981918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9078795.post-28585799666158068372009-01-11T21:52:00.000+03:002009-01-11T21:52:00.000+03:00I'm no expert and my opinion holds no merit.But so...I'm no expert and my opinion holds no merit.<BR/><BR/>But so what it is worth, spelling check and punctuation are essentials.<BR/><BR/>One problem, it seems that you've had the introduction and slowly guided the user into detailing the problem's layers. The last paragraph could have been exchanged with the one before it, as the understanding of his true feelings seems in the correct development Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9078795.post-42836329320815751592009-01-10T22:49:00.000+03:002009-01-10T22:49:00.000+03:00Anonymous, Thanks for the feeback. Since this is ...Anonymous, <BR/><BR/>Thanks for the feeback. Since this is a story could you give feedback on the writing itself? I am thinking of a project and I'd like some feedback on my writing style :)illusionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10442583862568981918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9078795.post-71297129373019139622009-01-09T10:53:00.000+03:002009-01-09T10:53:00.000+03:00"even if there is no future for them she just need...<B><I>"even if there is no future for them she just needs to hear them"</I></B><BR/><BR/>Maybe he doesn't want to get her hopes high, he can't hide the feelings as they beam through his eyes but as he knows that there is no future for them, then he shouldn't be promising her the impossibility, just being a gentleman.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com